Tuesday 1 March 2011

TALK TO HER - WHILE YOU SLEEP



WHILE YOU SLEEP, YOU ARE MINE COMPLETELY
WHILE YOU SLEEP, YOU WHISPER TO ME SWEETLY.
I CLIMB INSIDE TO WATCH YOUR DREAM
UNTIL YOU WAKE I WILL REMAIN
COMMITTED TO YOU DEEPLY

MY LOVE, I WATCH YOU DANCE PAST MY WINDOW,
AND SUDDENLY YOU FELL INTO MY ARMS

7 comments:

  1. Rachel,
    this poetry is beautiful. I will send your words to my daughter. I think she like it, too. Today she feels ill and so I advise her, to stay in bed.
    Stefan xx

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  2. Hi Rachel

    I like to watch your progress.
    Yours is similar to my approach, but unlike me, you follow through.
    Be still and find quiet.

    xx

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  3. In my facebook comment I talked about the desire to own another person. Adding that it's of course quite a natural desire to have. I mean, I'm not sure completely selfless love is even possible or exists.

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  4. And then of course there's the film within the film which you've taken here!

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  5. Lovely cozy kitchen! Watched the movie again. The words & music convey the feeling of indeterminate waiting, hoping. I look forward to hearing where it goes. Merci beaucoup.

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  6. Beautiful poetry. You are so great at it.

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