she had traveled to get to be under the bed; had been in the boot; had been such a part of that fabulous house; look how far she had come to be with the one daughter.
I would like to hear more from her point of view. Was hoping for sound here, too. Sometime?
Lookin good! Think the first two lines already capture the tremendousness and emotion yet at the same time the humour of the situation.
ReplyDeleteshe had traveled to get to be under the bed; had been in the boot; had been such a part of that fabulous house; look how far she had come to be with the one daughter.
ReplyDeleteI would like to hear more from her point of view. Was hoping for sound here, too. Sometime?
must get off to work! xo
and we're off........
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